I felt this design didn't emphasize the geometric style of Futura enough. I experimented with adding more shapes, lines and letters that showcase these characteristics. I also felt that some of the text (such as Paul Renner) felt like it was a bit disconnected from the design so I rearranged them to align with different design features more clearly.
Made "1927" in Futura Bold and aligned it to black line to give it some consistency within the design. Alteration of the A in the corner design, drawing from a previous idea I had in my sketchbook. I prefer the previous version, this one looks too gothic and doesn't really say 'simple' geometic shapes. But the setting of '1927' is an improvement.
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